How not to write a book blurb

Might be just me, but who the hell thought this was a sensible first line for a blurb?

"…life of Serge Carrefax, a man who – as his name suggests – surges into …."

Seriously? After that it sounds like It could be interesting, but I’m never going to go buy a copy of something with such a twattish description.

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